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Old 01-11-2015, 12:13 AM
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I think we can come up with a better way of writing reviews than to go on and on about "great coffee"...

Example:
"I met Sally last night and she rocked my world. Sweet looks, sexy conversation and made the time fly by way too quickly. She put a smile on my face and left me with no regrets in seeing her.
It was like being on a date with a girlfriend.
I will see her again and highly recommend this sweet lady to all you guys looking for real companionship."

or

"I met Sally last night and I wasn't impressed. She didn't seem interested in me and felt very cold. It was like being stuck at home with my ex wife.
I would not recommend this girl to anyone."
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Old 01-11-2015, 05:00 AM
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Good idea. Perhaps this could be a sticky so we can just copy and paste those examples and change the name as needed.
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Old 01-11-2015, 06:08 AM
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Good idea. Perhaps this could be a sticky so we can just copy and paste those examples and change the name as needed.
That's not very nice Jeff D. You stop your complaining. I think I speak for everyone when I say, we don't appreciate your sarcastic tone.

That's a fine example of review writing G Man. I cannot wait to write one up.

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Old 01-11-2015, 06:41 AM
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Thanks for the examples G.

I think I'll use my review on Addison as a template moving forward. It's along those lines. The coffee talk is fun but admittedly after going back and reading a few including my own it gets a bit stale after a while.
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Old 01-11-2015, 12:59 PM
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I think we can come up with a better way of writing reviews than to go on and on about "great coffee"...

Example:
"I met Sally last night and she rocked my world. Sweet looks, sexy conversation and made the time fly by way too quickly. She put a smile on my face and left me with no regrets in seeing her.
It was like being on a date with a girlfriend.
I will see her again and highly recommend this sweet lady to all you guys looking for real companionship."

or

"I met Sally last night and I wasn't impressed. She didn't seem interested in me and felt very cold. It was like being stuck at home with my ex wife.
I would not recommend this girl to anyone."
Thanks for the intervention G ! I thought Tipper and I were the only ones that were groaning every time a 'coffee' review was posted ... hey I love reviews and don't think there's near enough of them lately, however I was starting to feel ill after SO many of them!!! Yup Blues, I agree it was getting very old and stale
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Old 01-11-2015, 01:14 PM
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That's a fine example of review writing G Man. I cannot wait to write one up.
It will be a momentous moment in EC history I'm sure.
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Old 01-11-2015, 02:14 PM
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The coffee reviews were cute at first but soooooo obvious that after a while they were becoming useless for what was so obviously being described. I like G's suggestion. Or just write reviews the same as before. After all your describing your time and nothing more, at a mutually agreed to encounter.

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Old 01-11-2015, 02:37 PM
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very old and stale
Like day old turkey bacon in an egg white omelete. That's the problem. I don't think anyone knows what to write. Thanks again G for the examples.
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Old 01-11-2015, 03:44 PM
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Thanks for the examples G.

I think I'll use my review on Addison as a template moving forward. It's along those lines. The coffee talk is fun but admittedly after going back and reading a few including my own it gets a bit stale after a while.
..unless you are actually talking about the coffee!!
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Old 01-11-2015, 03:52 PM
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..unless you are actually talking about the coffee!!
Of course! Loved your coffee.....and everything else.
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