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Gerald 01-11-2015 12:13 AM

Writing a good review
 
I think we can come up with a better way of writing reviews than to go on and on about "great coffee"...:rolleyes:

Example:
"I met Sally last night and she rocked my world. Sweet looks, sexy conversation and made the time fly by way too quickly. She put a smile on my face and left me with no regrets in seeing her.
It was like being on a date with a girlfriend.
I will see her again and highly recommend this sweet lady to all you guys looking for real companionship."

or

"I met Sally last night and I wasn't impressed. She didn't seem interested in me and felt very cold. It was like being stuck at home with my ex wife.
I would not recommend this girl to anyone."

JeffD 01-11-2015 05:00 AM

Re: Writing a good review
 
Good idea. Perhaps this could be a sticky so we can just copy and paste those examples and change the name as needed.

shallow hal 01-11-2015 06:08 AM

Re: Writing a good review
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by JeffD (Post 177157)
Good idea. Perhaps this could be a sticky so we can just copy and paste those examples and change the name as needed.

That's not very nice Jeff D. You stop your complaining. I think I speak for everyone when I say, we don't appreciate your sarcastic tone.

That's a fine example of review writing G Man. I cannot wait to write one up.

Blues 01-11-2015 06:41 AM

Re: Writing a good review
 
Thanks for the examples G.

I think I'll use my review on Addison as a template moving forward. It's along those lines. The coffee talk is fun but admittedly after going back and reading a few including my own it gets a bit stale after a while.

VIPER 01-11-2015 12:59 PM

Re: Writing a good review
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Gerald (Post 177153)
I think we can come up with a better way of writing reviews than to go on and on about "great coffee"...:rolleyes:

Example:
"I met Sally last night and she rocked my world. Sweet looks, sexy conversation and made the time fly by way too quickly. She put a smile on my face and left me with no regrets in seeing her.
It was like being on a date with a girlfriend.
I will see her again and highly recommend this sweet lady to all you guys looking for real companionship."

or

"I met Sally last night and I wasn't impressed. She didn't seem interested in me and felt very cold. It was like being stuck at home with my ex wife.
I would not recommend this girl to anyone."

Thanks for the intervention G ! I thought Tipper and I were the only ones that were groaning every time a 'coffee' review was posted :wink:... hey I love reviews and don't think there's near enough of them lately, however I was starting to feel ill after SO many of them!!! :eek:Yup Blues, I agree it was getting very old and stale:sick:

JeffD 01-11-2015 01:14 PM

Re: Writing a good review
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by shallow hal (Post 177158)
That's a fine example of review writing G Man. I cannot wait to write one up.

It will be a momentous moment in EC history I'm sure.

LTO_3 01-11-2015 02:14 PM

Re: Writing a good review
 
The coffee reviews were cute at first but soooooo obvious that after a while they were becoming useless for what was so obviously being described. I like G's suggestion. Or just write reviews the same as before. After all your describing your time and nothing more, at a mutually agreed to encounter.

LTO_3

Blues 01-11-2015 02:37 PM

Re: Writing a good review
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by VIPER (Post 177163)
very old and stale:sick:

Like day old turkey bacon in an egg white omelete.:wink: That's the problem. I don't think anyone knows what to write. Thanks again G for the examples.

Jorja 01-11-2015 03:44 PM

Re: Writing a good review
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Blues (Post 177159)
Thanks for the examples G.

I think I'll use my review on Addison as a template moving forward. It's along those lines. The coffee talk is fun but admittedly after going back and reading a few including my own it gets a bit stale after a while.

..unless you are actually talking about the coffee!!:wink:

Blues 01-11-2015 03:52 PM

Re: Writing a good review
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Jorja (Post 177173)
..unless you are actually talking about the coffee!!:wink:

Of course! Loved your coffee.....and everything else. :grin:

Privates Investigator 01-11-2015 05:07 PM

Re: Writing a good review
 
Or short, sweet and simple? Like this?


http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=CNtXqBZc5a0


I might have just dated myself?

shallow hal 01-11-2015 06:27 PM

Re: Writing a good review
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by JeffD (Post 177164)
It will be a momentous moment in EC history I'm sure.

Oh, they're coming big boy. Get out your lube and tissues. I've kept you waiting long enough.

Mushroom Stamp 01-12-2015 12:30 PM

Re: Writing a good review
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by VIPER (Post 177163)
Thanks for the intervention G ! I thought Tipper and I were the only ones that were groaning every time a 'coffee' review was posted :wink:... hey I love reviews and don't think there's near enough of them lately, however I was starting to feel ill after SO many of them!!! :eek:Yup Blues, I agree it was getting very old and stale:sick:

Nope, G didn't say that he groaned every time one was posted or that they made him feel ill. He just suggested a little different approach as to how to write them post C36, without sounding ungrateful to those that were willing to make an attempt to share some information. Not everyone is willing you know...

Blues 01-12-2015 01:20 PM

Re: Writing a good review
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Mushroom Stamp (Post 177204)
Nope, G didn't say that he groaned every time one was posted or that they made him feel ill. He just suggested a little different approach as to how to write them post C36, without sounding ungrateful to those that were willing to make an attempt to share some information. Not everyone is willing you know...

And I appreciated your efforts as well MS.

VIPER 01-12-2015 03:59 PM

Re: Writing a good review
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Blues (Post 177205)
And I appreciated your efforts as well MS.

As I stated previously, reviews are always appreciated! I have done my fair share for the community! I respect the guys who take the time to post reviews....there are only a small percentage of us members who have shared their experiences with us in this respect...so props to our minority! :cool:
However, sometimes things can be overdone and I felt the coffee reviews were Waaay overdone imho and were making me nauseous ...didn't mean to offend anyone voicing my feeling on this matter tho

Blues 01-12-2015 05:03 PM

Re: Writing a good review
 
No offence taken Viper. :smile:

Gerald 01-19-2015 12:34 PM

Re: Writing a good review
 
Just thought I'd add, I don't have any issues with the term "GFE".
A Girl Friend Experience is simply time with a lady who makes you feel comfortable and like you've known her for years.
It's not about sexual services. After all my girlfriend never gives me sex when she's had a bad day, on the rag, cleaning the house, cooking dinner, shopping with my money, watching her favourite show, reading, too tired, her child is home, she's pissed off because I didn't empty the garbage, if I just farted, and five thousand other reasons.....:sadcry3:

Damn, I wish I knew where to find a hooker....:grinevil2:

whatsinaname 01-19-2015 05:00 PM

Re: Writing a good review
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Gerald (Post 177431)
Just thought I'd add, I don't have any issues with the term "GFE".
A Girl Friend Experience is simply time with a lady who makes you feel comfortable and like you've known her for years.
It's not about sexual services. After all my girlfriend never gives me sex when she's had a bad day, on the rag, cleaning the house, cooking dinner, shopping with my money, watching her favourite show, reading, too tired, her child is home, she's pissed off because I didn't empty the garbage, if I just farted, and five thousand other reasons.....:sadcry3:

Maybe take her out for coffee instead...


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